As usual, you have a great knack of writing these Joey Styles' intro's. They continue to be a fun read.
Obviously no idea at this point exactly where it will end up, but I'm really interested in the debut of 'Stunning' Steve Austin here. The idea that the mental anguish of being fired has driven him to the delusional point of thinking ECW is WCW is actually kind of awesome. Fun promo, a good start to the character here, and I'm looking forward to much more. Good job.
Man that picture of Jerry Lynn cracks me up. So long ago... Anyway I liked that you went with Maritato/Lynn as the opener. That's what ECW would do a lot back in the day anyway, open with the technical wrestling before the carnage took over. I'm glad you stuck with that system here. I'm not really a fan of Jerry Lynn so I'm even more pumped to see Maritato get the win here. The match itself was fine, staying away from the weapon use as it should have.
One of the things I will raise as potentially something to look at. Whilst the match writing has been good, there's probably a few matches, where it kind of feels like one paragraph is still early on in the match, and then the next one is the finishing one. I'm not saying you need to write every little detail of every match, but at the bare minimum, a bridging statement would be nice. For example, maybe after Lynn hit the Plancha in the opening and got a near fall, "Guido went back to work on the arm, keeping Lynn grounded and torturing him for the next few minutes". I'm sure you could probably come up with something better than my uninspired example, but I hope that makes sense. There's just a slight disconnect from a reader (or at least my) perspective to go from opening, Plancha, near fall, Guido goes back to the arm, oh hey now the match is over.
So I'm assuming Mikey isn't going to win the ECW Championship in this timeline lol? I don't mind Konnan coming in and squashing him as the perfect intro to make him and his Mexican wave seem like a serious threat. Konnan dragging out the match to further torture Mikey and be arrogant works to. No issues with this one.
If the Steiners are going back to WCW, damn right they should do the job on their way out. I think you put over the explosive strength battle between the Steiners/Pitbulls quite well. The Rick Steiner broken leg spot caught me completely off guard, so he won't be around anytime soon. I will say Pitbulls getting a win over the Steiners is huge, regardless of circumstance. I think this probably sets them up for a title shot, whilst I assume Steiners will be gone now.
I know you were big on the Scorpio/Mysterio match, and to be honest, it was the match of the night from a technical standpoint. It definitely delivered. With Rey involved, it hit the right notes, with the fans cheering for Rey even though he's aligned with the villain because his offense is just so damn cool. Awesome spots to, particular the clever use of Konnan to hurl Rey into the crowd onto Scorpio. Such an ECW move, so I really like that this felt like an ECW match... Until you went for the count out spot. They didn't do count outs in ECW, so this felt really out of place, to be honest. It is what it is but I'd just avoid doing that again unless you're running a Death Match or something. I was also surprised by the frazzled nature of Scorpio's reaction to being challenged. He was one of the top guy's during his TV title run, and If I remember right, even when challenged, he always maintained his cool. I guess I'm just intrigued whether this is just a one off or there's more there. But in general, a really well put together match and Scorpio winning felt like the right move. I like you pulling the trigger right away for Mysterio to be face as well, because Rey in this era in North America is just not getting boos. Really well done.
I marked out for the nintendo as a weapon. This was a typical plunder ECW match, and you delivered well. One query, I don't know I missed something, but it seemed weird that Woman wasn't out at ringside with The Sandman. I'm unsure if I missed something saying she wouldn't be there or if that was an oversight from you. But yeah, more Woman stroking the cane please. I actually don't have much else to say for this match. I thought yoiu captured the carnage of an ECW match involving these four well, so not really any feedback to give on the writing. From a booking standpoint, I LOVE the result because surely it means we get Sandman/Cactus at some point which I can definitely get excited for.
I see you just randomly felt like writing out the names of the entrance songs for the main event lol. Now this is ECW. As much as Scorpio/Rey was the technical match of the night, this was my favourite to read. I just feel like you saved a lot of really big, brutal moments for this one which made it stand out... Which makes complete sense as it is the main event. Description like "skin looking like shredded paper", the stapling the dollar bills, the smashing a glass bottle to stab the opponent with sharp edges, so much stuff in here that was brutal. And it all culminated with the big moment, Jack coming off the top of the cage. The Gangstas had to win this as the newer entity at this point so I think you booked this the right way. I'm torn on the referee stoppage call though. Assuming you wanted to protect Public Enemy and perhaps continue the feud, but ECW really prided itself on no crappy finishes on big shows. I think this referee stoppage could have worked on an undercard match, but I can't help but feel the main event of an ECW show finishing this way might have been hated on by the crowd. Especially when Jack be jumping off balconies every other week anyway. In short, I think you made the right decision in terms of winner, but wasn't a huge fan of the match ending the way it did, mainly because it's ECW.
A really good effort for first PPV/special whatever you want to call it. I picked on a couple of things because that's just what I do, but the enjoyment as a reader was here. Really promising start to this BTB, looking forward to what's next, especially with 'Stunning' Steve Austin.